Second poem i finished this week. this one is very emotional. please comment.
Leave me alone,
I don't need you adding problems to my life,
Adding things that make me strife,
I want to be with you I love you you so much,
But why chase something that I can't touch,
My friends will scream "talk to her!!!",
"why?! so you guys can watch me suffer!!!",
I'm so sick and tired of this shit,
What I think is right, I'm doing it all wrong,
Whether I want to or not I might lose you cause of this song,
Leave if you want i'm just expressing my mind,
My wounds have nothing to bind,
I'll bleed it out and my face begins to cry,
my tears are wet but my face is dry,
Your grasp on me has faded,
My love for you is outdated,
This phase of stress is only a temporary state,
Just like two kids going out on a single date,
I seriously can't wait, to debate, on a slate,of cold ice,
Gamble with my life, i'm shakin it up and throwin the dice,
the way my life is going, I guess i'm outta luck,
Look closely as I get hit by this truck,
BAM! I get hit and catch you by surprise,
Took you long enough to fuckin realize,
You worry about me now that i'm dead,
But i'm happy cause i'll get to see drop dead fred,
My soul is in the heaven's above,
Your beauty can't be compared, not even to a dove,
and this is the end to this poem now,
I'll talk to you later, hit you up, see ya, ciao.
I'm new here, but i like making new friends so talk to me if your the same. I'm also looking for someone by the name of kumori the cat if you have any info please tell me.
Linda: i took some "tylenol" to get rid of my headache 30 min. ago. derek wasn't in his room so i just took two pills and left and ever since I saw him today i've wanted him so bad now i must catch up to him! *goes faster*
Danny: Whatever that means, stop right now! *tries to catch Linda, but cates her around her waist, causing it to accidentally rip off her skirt (now because of it, Linda now runs around in her underwear).* Oh, boy. *catches up again, but faster*
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